WRITING TASK 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The table and pie chart give information about population in Australia according to different nationalities and areas.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where necessary.

Write at least 150 words

OPENING (1 sen)

Paraphrase the topic: The table and pie chart give information about population in Australia according to different nationalities and areas.

=> The table shows the rates of five main nationalities and the the table indicates the population levels in the city and countryside in Australia. 

OVERVIEW (2 sen.)

NO TIMELINE

S1: Common comparisons (Big proportions, Small proportions)

Native speakers: the most/ majority/ major

Foreigners: The highest: British  

=> From general perspective, we can see that the native speakers account to the most population in Australia.

S2: Biggest proportion (+ Smallest proportion)

Cities: The most (populated, popular, common, commonplace, crowded, dense population)

=> Particularly, Australian cities are the most populated without regards to nationalities.

BODY 1 (DETAILS 1) (3-4 sen): Graph 1 (Pie chart) (PA, Minh Ngọc)

S1. Australian: over 70%

S2: British: 7%

S3: NZ, Chinese, Dutch: 1-3%

=> It’s noticeable to see from the pie chart that the Autralian dominates the population density in this country with over 70%. It is followed by British who live in this place with a total of 7%. Meanwhile, the figures for New Zealander, Chinese, and Dutch settling down there are each only 1-3%.

While + Clause 1, Clause 2.

BODY 2 (DETAILS 2) (3-4 sen): Graph 2 (Table) (Ngân Hà, QA)

S1: Australian: The most in the countryside (20%)

S2. Dutch: (17%)

S3. Chinese: nearly 100% in cities

S4: British and NZ: About 90%

=> In terms of the demographic arrangement in Australia, the number of indigenous people in the Australian rural areas is the highest at 20%, with the others so far lower. Similarly, the second greatest proportion in terms of the countryside falls into the category of the Dutch of 17%. By contrast, almost all Chinese migrating to Australia choose to live in urban areas while about 90% British and New Zealander also move to the Australian cities.      

=> FULL DESCRIPTION 

The table shows the rates of five main nationalities and the the table indicates the population levels in the city and countryside in Australia.

From general perspective, we can see that the native speakers account to the most population in Australia. Particularly, Australian cities are the most populated without regards to nationalities.

It’s noticeable to see from the pie chart that the Autralian dominates the population density in this country with over 70%. It is followed by British who live in this place with a total of 7%. Meanwhile, the figures for New Zealander, Chinese, and Dutch settling down there are each only 1-3%.

In terms of the demographic arrangement in Australia, the number of indigenous people in the Australian rural areas is the highest at 20%, with the others so far lower. Similarly, the second greatest proportion in terms of the countryside falls into the category of the Dutch of 17%. By contrast, almost all Chinese migrating to Australia choose to live in urban areas while about 90% British and New Zealander also move to the Australian cities.